I started this essay with Charlie the Unicorn in Candyland . I personally didn't like how my essay turned out. I think it is because on youtube Charlie has a rougher personality, but in this essay he isn't funny at all. Anyway I hope you enjoy the essay written by Class 22!!
Once upon a time...
It was a dark and stormy nightin Candyland. Charlie the unicon was sleeping in his cave. Then his 2 nonnamed pink and blue friends come in going, "Charlie.Charlie...Chaaaaarlie~ Chaaaarrrlliiiee!" Then Charlie the Unicorn, awakened said "What! What do you want?!" Then his friends said "Let's go to Candy Mountain!!" Grumpily, Charlie replied "But it's too dark to go, and I'm sleepy. Why did you wake me up? If you want to go then go alone." His friends said, "We want to go to the lake" He replied, "The lake we can drink is right there! Just go!" His friends said "We say a person pouring a wierd liquid in ther today." Curious,Charlie said "A liquid??" Totally serious, his friends said "Yeah it was purple..It could be poison!!" Charlie said,"Let's go to the lake." Charlie and his friends went to the lake. There were amny dead fish, and birds. They all went, "Uh oh...They were alive before the man poured that stuff into the lake.. It must be poison!!" Charlie felt so angry that he cried out, "Let's find the man who did this to our lake!" 'It was is unfair. Why did the mand have to do that?' thought Charlie. His friends neighed and ran full speed toward the direction the man went at full speed."We'll catch him and show him what happens if someone pollytes our lake!" said Charlie. They walked up the mountain, and crossed to another lake.However this lake was polluted too! He and his friends were so annoyed that they didn't know it was almost night time. Then they waw a strane house made of bricks and wood, They walked inside the strange home. They were greeted by a cheery girl unicorn who neighed and owed. The unicorns stood there shocked. The girl unicorn explained, "The purple potion you saw doday was a potion to keill the unworthy. Everyone had died, but obviously because you survived, you deserve to live... So now you may find the people who are worthy and together we can live happily!" So the 4 unicorns lived happily ever after.
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