Friday, January 14, 2011

Diamante Poem(s)

Water, Fire

Water
wet, cool
freezing, chilling, numbing
ice, dew, campfire, candles
burning, melting, drying
hot, smoke
Fire

Water is wet and feels cool on my face. hen it is cold water feels freezing, chilling, and numbing. Water turns into ice, pretty water is dew. The happiest fire is a campfire, the cutest one is a candle. You burn something for fire, things melt, or you dry things by a fire. Fires are hot, and smoke comes out.

Pencil, Eraser

Pencil
bold, strong
writing, making, drawing
lead, wood, rubber, chemicals
erasing, losing, smudging
cautious careful
Eraser

When I write I press hard making we feel strong, which makes me think of the word bold. You write with a pencil, you make words, and draw with it too. Pencils are made from lead and wood, erasers are made from rubber and chemicals. With and eraser you erase, lose words, and smudge pencil lead. You have to erase cautiously or else you might erase something else, so you need to be careful.


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  2. Very good work. Your descriptions using the words is wonderful, and are almost poems themselves. Nice pics! This blog is looking great.

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